We are almost ready to write our discussion try of the IELTS, but first we have a small task to accomplish. Now we need a conclusion and our discussion try of the IELTS is over. In an IELTS test, it is important to be able to say the same things in different ways, either by paraphrasing and/or using synonyms. During the planning phase, quickly note some synonyms for keywords that you can use to store that you need to stop and think about the right language while you write. Hello Liz and thank you for all the information you give us!! I`d like to ask you. In this type of essay, can I add examples of my personal experience? or I`m just giving my opinion to the introduction and nowhere else? Hey, Liz. I would like to clarify my doubts about this type of test. There is a test issue in your website that concerns the rapid expansion of supermarkets, which is why local stores are closing, and some people think that this is causing the death of local communities. The conclusions on the IELTS discussions should do two things: obesity has become a major problem, as a growing percentage of the population has become overweight, which has weighed heavily on health authorities and resulted in higher costs. One solution that will be implemented is to introduce more physical education into the curriculum. I think I fully agree that the integration of active education will be very useful in the fight against obesity. First, this essay discusses how physical education will raise awareness of the benefits of a healthy lifestyle. Second, this trial discusses the importance of combining exercise with a healthy diet.

That`s all. We`ve finished our test. Here is with the 4 paragraphs. I have more ideas here than I need, so I will choose two to evolve in the essay — one for each of the main texts. If you keep a clear evolution of ideas throughout your essay, you will get high marks for task completion, cohesion and consistency. Liz, it`s Mr. Jasjit singh here and I`m the IELTS coach in a company. Here I would like to point out that you used “sports children” in the para-2 body of the essay, although the word SPORTY is an informal word.